Dia duit!!

Sorry if this isn't in the correct format. I'm looking to get the following translated into Irish (any version will do) in a somewhat poetic form

Fire within me
Air above me
Water around me
Earth beneath me

Thanks for any help

Tine istigh ionam
Aer os mo chionn
Uisce mórthimpeall orm
Talamh fúm


is my suggestion.

For other translators: I used "mórthimpeall orm" mainly because I consider it more poetic than just "timpeall orm", but both can work I suppose. The former invokes a sense "all around me" IMO so I think it's slightly better.

Wait for more input.