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my heart,m love i will take you deep into the woods,as we lay by the water's edge,by the black birds song,i call out your name and ask you to marry me

i think its some version of old poem,can anyone help


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Laoch wrote:
my heart,m love i will take you deep into the woods,as we lay by the water's edge,by the black birds song,i call out your name and ask you to marry me

i think its some version of old poem,can anyone help

What you've posted has spelling and punctuation issues, so people may not be responding because they're not sure what you are asking. You may want to rewrite it with the punctuation and spelling corrected.

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PostPosted: Mon 18 Apr 2016 1:39 am 
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CaoimhínSF wrote:
Laoch wrote:
my heart,m love i will take you deep into the woods,as we lay by the water's edge,by the black birds song,i call out your name and ask you to marry me

i think its some version of old poem,can anyone help

What you've posted has spelling and punctuation issues, so people may not be responding because they're not sure what you are asking. You may want to rewrite it with the punctuation and spelling corrected.



Ok....
My heart,My love, I will take you deep into the woods someday,as we lay by the water's edge,beneath the trees,by the blackbird song,I call out your name and ask you to marry me.


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PostPosted: Mon 18 Apr 2016 2:12 am 
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Laoch wrote:
CaoimhínSF wrote:
Laoch wrote:
my heart,m love i will take you deep into the woods,as we lay by the water's edge,by the black birds song,i call out your name and ask you to marry me

i think its some version of old poem,can anyone help

What you've posted has spelling and punctuation issues, so people may not be responding because they're not sure what you are asking. You may want to rewrite it with the punctuation and spelling corrected.



Ok....
My heart,My love, I will take you deep into the woods someday,as we lay by the water's edge,beneath the trees,by the blackbird song,I call out your name and ask you to marry me.


I may be able to take a closer look at this later, but for right now, here's a possible correction to the punctuation that may help the other translators:

My heart, my love: I will take you deep into the woods someday [and] as we lie by the water's edge beneath the trees, [listening to] the blackbird's song, I will call out your name and ask you to marry me.

If it seems that we're being picky about punctuation and wording, it really makes a difference in pronunciation...we're not just being nitpicky. If what I have above isn't correct, please let us know.

Redwolf


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PostPosted: Mon 18 Apr 2016 3:07 am 
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Redwolf wrote:
Laoch wrote:
CaoimhínSF wrote:
Laoch wrote:
my heart,m love i will take you deep into the woods,as we lay by the water's edge,by the black birds song,i call out your name and ask you to marry me

i think its some version of old poem,can anyone help

What you've posted has spelling and punctuation issues, so people may not be responding because they're not sure what you are asking. You may want to rewrite it with the punctuation and spelling corrected.



Ok....
My heart,My love, I will take you deep into the woods someday,as we lay by the water's edge,beneath the trees,by the blackbird song,I call out your name and ask you to marry me.


I may be able to take a closer look at this later, but for right now, here's a possible correction to the punctuation that may help the other translators:

My heart, my love: I will take you deep into the woods someday [and] as we lie by the water's edge beneath the trees, [listening to] the blackbird's song, I will call out your name and ask you to marry me.

If it seems that we're being picky about punctuation and wording, it really makes a difference in pronunciation...we're not just being nitpicky. If what I have above isn't correct, please let us know.

Redwolf


That's the gist of what I was trying to type,forgive the rather scattered grammar,It isn't my forte.


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PostPosted: Mon 18 Apr 2016 6:11 am 
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Laoch wrote:
Redwolf wrote:
Laoch wrote:
CaoimhínSF wrote:
Laoch wrote:
my heart,m love i will take you deep into the woods,as we lay by the water's edge,by the black birds song,i call out your name and ask you to marry me

i think its some version of old poem,can anyone help

What you've posted has spelling and punctuation issues, so people may not be responding because they're not sure what you are asking. You may want to rewrite it with the punctuation and spelling corrected.



Ok....
My heart,My love, I will take you deep into the woods someday,as we lay by the water's edge,beneath the trees,by the blackbird song,I call out your name and ask you to marry me.


I may be able to take a closer look at this later, but for right now, here's a possible correction to the punctuation that may help the other translators:

My heart, my love: I will take you deep into the woods someday [and] as we lie by the water's edge beneath the trees, [listening to] the blackbird's song, I will call out your name and ask you to marry me.

If it seems that we're being picky about punctuation and wording, it really makes a difference in pronunciation...we're not just being nitpicky. If what I have above isn't correct, please let us know.

Redwolf


That's the gist of what I was trying to type,forgive the rather scattered grammar,It isn't my forte.


No worries. Give us a bit to work on it.


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PostPosted: Mon 18 Apr 2016 8:56 pm 
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Laoch wrote:
my heart,m love i will take you deep into the woods,as we lay by the water's edge,by the black birds song,i call out your name and ask you to marry me

i think its some version of old poem,can anyone help

Changed a bit to suit Irish:

A chroí, a stór, raghad in éineacht leat go maith sa choíll, liúfad t'ainm agus sinne ar bruach na habhann, céiliúradh an londuibh i gcóngar dúinn, agus ansan cuirfead an cheist.

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An Lon Dubh wrote:
A choí, a stór, raghad in éineacht leat go maith sa choíll, liúfad t'ainm agus sinne ar bruach na habhann, céiliúradh an londuibh i gcóngar dúinn, agus ansan cuirfead an cheist.
A chroí, a stór …


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