As I said in my post immediately preceding yours, I think "cuir in áireamh na Naomh" is dubious, but I'm happy to be told otherwise.

Thanks errigal.Do you have an idea on what it should be?/whats wrong with that translation? Im just a learner so all input is very much welcomed.Does the rest of it look ok to you? Thanks again

Sure didn't I give you an alternative version in the post I referred to?

I don't think it sounds dubious, makes sense to me

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san áireamh "including, included".

rud a chur san áireamh "to take sth into account; to include sth"

in áireamh na Naomh seemed a reasonable substitution for san áireamh to me.


I would have said i measc na Naomh rather than i measc do Naomh

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My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect, but I can also speak Ulster and Munster Irish with native-level pronunciation.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
Gaeilge Chonnacht (GC), go háraid Gaeilge Chois Fhairrge (GCF), Gaeilic Uladh (GU), Gaelainn na Mumhan (GM), agus Gaeilge an Chaighdeáin Oifigiúil (CO).

I was also going to give that as a suggestion.

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Thanks for the replys.Do you agree on this being correct ...

Nuair a bheidh faobhar ar mo chlaíomh lonrach, agus go dtéim i mbun cúis na córa, déanfaidh mé díoltas a imirt ar mo naimhde, agus díolfaidh mé an comhar le lucht m’fhuatha.
A Thiarna, ardaigh ar do láimh dheis mé agus cuir in áireamh na Naomh mé

or this way round,depending on dialect?
(A Thiarna, ardaigh mé ar do láimh dheis agus cuir mé in áireamh na Naomh )

Il be trying to write it in Seanchló font so will be back to ask for a check on that aswell please.Sorry for all the questions but thanks for the help.

Like this:

Nuair a ḃeiḋ faoḃar ar mo ċlaíoṁ lonraċ, agus go dtéim i mbun cúis na córa, déanfaiḋ mé díoltas a imirt ar mo naiṁde, agus díolfaiḋ mé an coṁar le luċt m’ḟuaṫa.
A Ṫiarna, ardaiġ ar do láiṁ ḋeis mé agus cuir in áireaṁ na Naoṁ mé.

Pending further comment/input on the above changes, of course.

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My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect, but I can also speak Ulster and Munster Irish with native-level pronunciation.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
Gaeilge Chonnacht (GC), go háraid Gaeilge Chois Fhairrge (GCF), Gaeilic Uladh (GU), Gaelainn na Mumhan (GM), agus Gaeilge an Chaighdeáin Oifigiúil (CO).

Exactly like that You are psychic Breandán!
Ive been playing around with it on the ellipsix site but i didnt know how to post it on here as it only allows me to save it as an image from the website,rather than a text file.I have the font on my computer but that doesnt put the dots on the letters.
Let me into your secret Breandán

Thanks very much.And would you agree on the translation i wrote? It seems only errigal thought it was maybe incorrect.

, weeman there is a automatic bunchló converter on the site. When you go to enter a reply, at the menu under the green banner that says "post a reply" with all the options like Quote, underline, centre etc.. You should see a drop down where it says "font" click on that and you'll se an option for bunchló. Click on that and you'll see that it appears in 2 brackets. Type in between the brackets, hit preview and it should be in the old style writing. . Breandán has really thought of it all !

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