Thank you for the corrections!

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Chuirfeadh sé a chois ... oftentimes the dative form (i.e. cois) replaces the normal form of certain feminine nouns in the nominative case (i.e. cos). In the case of this author, the dative forms láimh and cois often replace the nominative case forms.
ní éisteofar go deo arís leo 'they will not be listened to again'
dearúd, Munster form of dearmad (often spelt dearmhad ~ dearamhad)
Agus ansan gheobhainn mo chleataráil 'And then I would get my clattering'? For some reason part of me thinks that here cleataráil is a Béarlachas term meaning 'collateral'
scéim 'scheme, plan'
píopán 'spout'
subh 'jam'
drom, Munster form of droim
ar líne 'in a line'
bhíodh murdal ann gach aon mhaidin mar bhíodh gach éinne ag iarraidh na stocaí is fearr a fháil do fhéin could murdal here by a typo for murdar?
leac oighir 'sheet of ice'
cipín 'little stick'

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seanduine normally the prefix sean- is seana- when before consonants in Munster, which eliminates the DNTLS DTS rule, but I have also encountered the form seanduine. This could either be a standardisation or part of the authors individual speech
don mbóthar don often causes lenition in Munster, especially in Cork, but it is more often followed by eclipsis in CDh. 'on (< don) causes lenition (including t prefix to words starting with s-)
pén diabhal a tháinig orm 'whatever happened to me'
dhein sé scread orm 'he screamed at me'
an fhaid 'as long as'
geimhreadh, pronounced gíre
Bheadh sé ag tarrac abhaile móin a bheadh ... is there a reason that móin isn't in the genitive here?
níbh = ní raibh
turcaí 'turkey'
leapan genitive of leaba(idh), found alongside leapa
thar doras isteach here doras has become generalised (like 'top' in 'on top') and thus does not require the definite article. This occurrence is very common in Peadar Ó Laoghaire's Irish (e.g. go doras, chun tailimh) but is not as commonly found within CDh, I believe
nach deas é thú, this could also be found as nach deas t(h)ú. This could also be viewed as a shortening for nach deas é an rud/saghas/ní t(h)ú(-sa). The usage of é before the subject of the copula is very common in Munster, especially before definite nouns

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Soir gaċ síar, fé ḋeireaḋ thíar

Seanduine is always said like that. It has become a single word.
Móin - is separated from the verbal noun and is part of a subsequent noun phrase.

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roimhe sin, roimis sin is more common in CDh
Bhíodh an áit ag féachaint go hálainn this might be Béarlachas. I'm used to hearing Bhíodh an áit ag breathnú go hálainn
ag cíoradh a gruaige 'combing her hair'
ná mór na ceisteanna atá agat, typically nách ~ nach would be the negative interrogitive form or direct/indirect negative clause introducing form of the copula, but ná is also found (though most of the time it is only used with verbs)
gura maith agat phonetic spelling of go raibh maith agat. Perhaps go ra' maith agat would be more appropriate
Tá an tír ar fad siúlta agam 'I've walked the whole world'
té CDh form of tae
Ó ná tá fhios agam perhaps a grammatical error: Ó ná fuil (a) fhios agam?
séipéal, sáipéal is more common
ló dative of lá, one of the few masculine nouns that possess a distinct dative form
seint CDh form of seinm

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in airde staighre perhaps another example of generalisation and subsequent loss of the article?
coinneal 'candle'
ag fuaradh 'cooling off'
ná téir in aon ghiorracht do 'don't get close to them'
gan mhoill 'soon'
buaile 'miling place'
cnocán mór aoiligh 'a big pile of dung'
nach fiosrach atánn tú 'aren't you curious'
chuireadh sé an ruaig orainn is bhí an ceart aige 'he would chase us out and he was right to do so'
ní mór ná gur imigh mo anáil uaim 'I almost lost my breath'
teach tábhairne normally would be tigh tábhairne in Munster, but this might be an example of the nominative surviving within a specific phrase of this speakers ideolect (or it's just bad standardisation)

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Soir gaċ síar, fé ḋeireaḋ thíar

teach tábhairne is ti' táirne ̇

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lán go slait 'full to the yard'?
go dtí often said to only precede nouns that start with an (e.g. go dtí 'n nDaingean), but really it is used when preceding all definite nouns, as in go dtí Australia
gan dabht bhí cúpla cnag á fháil anois is arís agam agus é tuillte is dócha 'of course there I had the occasional knock, which I suppose I deserved'
peataíocht 'pettish, childish behaviour'
cad é sceitimíní 'what excitment'
caithfear coimeád ag threabhadh 'we'll have to keep at it'
dul a chodladh luath I would expect go luath, as it is being used as an adverb
tháinig stad ionam 'I stopped', where the noun stad is being used as the subject rather than the, quite flat, stadas
sin eile 'that's another thing'?
oíche. In Munster, inter-vocalic slender ch is usually pronounced h (except in compound words), but the word oíche often retains the strong /ç/ sound.
bhí sé fhéin sa chistin agus an pean ar an dtine does anybody have any idea as to what pean means here?
tá an mhaidin ag éalú uainn 'the morning is flying away from us'
gadhar normally in Munster the word madra is used to mean 'dog', gadhar having a more specific meaning, but based on the frequency of the usage of the word in the book, one might assume that the author uses gadhar in most contexts

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Soir gaċ síar, fé ḋeireaḋ thíar

I haven't checked the text, but:
1. peataíocht: could this mean "being treated as a pet"?
2. sin eile - this could mean "sin uile", that's all.
3. oíche: as far as I know, it is just íhi, with with strong nasalisation of the first vowel.
4. pean - pan??? saucepan

That would definitely make more sense in the context that it was given



Oral literature from Dunquin:



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