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 Post subject: Fill Arís
PostPosted: Sun 11 Mar 2012 11:10 pm 
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Fág Gleann na nGealt thoir,
Is a bhfuil d'aois seo ár dTiarna i d'fhuil,
Dún d'intinn ar ar tharla
Ó buaileadh Cath Chionn tSáile,
Is ón uair go bhfuil an t-ualach trom
Ia an bóthar fada, bain ded mheabhair
Srathar shibhialtach an Bhéarla,
Shelly, Keats is Shakespeare:
Fill arís ar do chuid,
Nigh d'intinn is nigh
Do theanga a chuaigh ceangailte i gcomhréiribh'
Bhí bunoscaionn le d'éirim:
Dein d'fhaoistin is dein
Síocháin led ghiniúin féinig
Is led thigh-se féin is ná tréig iad,
Ní dual do neach a thigh ná a threabh a thréigean.
Téir faobhar na faille siar tráthnóna gréine go Corca Dhuibhne,
Is chífir thiar ag bun na spéire ag ráthaíocht ann
An Uimhir Dhé, is an Modh Foshuiteach,
Is an tuiseal gairmeach ar bhéalaibh daoine:
Sin é do dhoras,
Dún Chaoin fé sholas an tráthnóna,
Buail is osclófar
D'intinn féin is do chló ceart.


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 Post subject: Re: Fill Arís
PostPosted: Mon 12 Mar 2012 12:24 am 
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Dán ana- dheas ar fad, saothar don chéad scoth! Ar chumais fhéinig é?

Very nice poem indeed, a masterpiece of the finest. Did you yourself compose it?
Or am I missing the point and you want it translated?- you need to say specifically what you want!

I specifically like the line: fill arís ar do chuid- return again to your (native) part.

Nigh d' intinn is nigh do theanga- I also like, some beautiful imagery of Corca Dhuibne- na faill (munster Irish for aill- cliff- "téir faobhar na faille")- incase some might be having trouble with finding that in the dictionary.

If it is yourself who composed it- molaim go hard thú!- I praise you to the highest. there are a few mistakes: bunoscionn is one I noted, you have bunoscaionn but I suspect they're typos!

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 Post subject: Re: Fill Arís
PostPosted: Mon 12 Mar 2012 1:46 am 
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An Cionnfhaolach wrote:
Dán ana- dheas ar fad, saothar don chéad scoth! Ar chumais fhéinig é?

Very nice poem indeed, a masterpiece of the finest. Did you yourself compose it?


Dán le Seán Ó Ríordáin atá ann.


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 Post subject: Re: Fill Arís
PostPosted: Mon 12 Mar 2012 2:11 am 
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Ana náire orm :D, ba chóra dhom dán don bhfear mór millteach a dh' aithint láithreach! Saothar don scoth is eadh é ar aon nós, Bhí Gaoluinn bhinn ages an Ríoghbhardánach! Ba chóra dhom a chrochadh! :D

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 Post subject: Re: Fill Arís
PostPosted: Tue 20 Mar 2012 8:59 pm 
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Dán leis an Ríordánach is ea eisean go dearfa!
Tá mé ag súil gur thaithnigh libh é.


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