CaoimhínSF,
Wow! Thank you so much for the quick reply. Through the other forum I was once again reminded how literal my thinking is, and I let all the different very welcome and appreciated suggestions overwhelm me. Over the holidays I thought about our dog, Irish, an awful lot and decided that my original translation request just didn't do my feelings about her justice. It's very important to me to have the "Sweet and pretty, pretty and sweet" line in there because that was actually one of our nicknames for her. Saying that to her always made us happy and made her whole body wag.
So now I'll wait for confirmation and/or suggestions from others, with me keeping a much more open mind.
I'll also be asking for pronunciation once we have this nailed down. That's going to be a big task for me, practicing the sound and syntax. I'm ready!
Thanks again!