Hi, mim. I meant to get back to you sooner but first work and then a stomach complaint kept me busy.
Definite improvement. Only two problems with the broad r in "try2":
Firstly, the first, initial r in
ramhar is perfect but the second, final r is overtrilled - one flap is enough.
Secondly, I still can't hear a flap in
carr, though as I've mentioned that can be due to recording quality.
For the slender r's in
aréir, what you have is the passable, but it would be nicer if the flapping was lighter and slightly buzzier.
The r in "ta_carr_agam_try1" is great. (The syllable straight after that, however, should be "am" rather than "um".)