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trixitaurus · **Joined:** Tue 29 Oct 2019 10:26 am **Posts:** 7

hi!

could somebody please help me with a simple translation of this text?

<water binds us
i watch it
sparkling city lights
crying softly

cry into the sea

all the way

the deep blue>

absolutely no problem if it's not possible. hope everybody's having a lovely week

tiomluasocein · **Joined:** Thu 01 Sep 2011 11:36 pm **Posts:** 687

trixitaurus wrote:

hi!

could somebody please help me with a simple translation of this text?

<water binds us
i watch it
sparkling city lights
crying softly

cry into the sea

all the way

the deep blue>

absolutely no problem if it's not possible. hope everybody's having a lovely week

This is my attempt as I understand your poem. Wait for more input.

ceangalíonn an t-uisce sinn
breathnaím air
soilse lonracha na cathrach
ag caoineadh go ciúin

caoinim síos san fharraige

síos ar fad

an gorm dorcha

trixitaurus · **Joined:** Tue 29 Oct 2019 10:26 am **Posts:** 7

thank you so much! really appreciate it

tiomluasocein · **Joined:** Thu 01 Sep 2011 11:36 pm **Posts:** 687

Get more input on this. There may be other good suggestions.

trixitaurus · **Joined:** Tue 29 Oct 2019 10:26 am **Posts:** 7

tiomluasocein wrote:

Get more input on this. There may be other good suggestions.

okay, will do! thanks again

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